You included all of the information necessary. You could have expanded and wrote a little more though. I liked your use of colors. It helped the page to flow more. It was good of you to include a way to remember how the characters are formed. The stories can help you remember how to write the characters easier. Also, you forgot to include tone marks of the pinyin on your document. The slightest change in tones change the whole meaning of the word, so be careful. Overall, I feel that you did a pretty good job on your notetaking project.
GDKCV12's comments:
Good use of colors and contrast. Included all information about characters such as radicals, stroke counts, etc. I liked the little "story" behind each character; these are good ways to remember the formation of the characters and are useful in distinguishing similar characters. Interesting questions raised some good points about the origins of the characters. However, there were no tone marks on any of the pinyin. Next time, use the pinyin editor to insert tones.
MJBCV12's comments: Overall, your project contained all of the important information, and was summarized very well. I really enjoyed reading the two different stories that explain how the characters were made. I also liked how you put two separate questions for the characters, because they really make you wonder why the characters are "shaped" the way they are, and it seems that they could have made them in a much more logical way. One thing that could have made your project a lot better is if you had put the tones over the pinyin, because without them you can not completely know how to pronounce them properly. Besides the tones, I think you did a great job, and everything was very well organized
ADSCV12's comments:
You included all of the information necessary. You could have expanded and wrote a little more though. I liked your use of colors. It helped the page to flow more. It was good of you to include a way to remember how the characters are formed. The stories can help you remember how to write the characters easier. Also, you forgot to include tone marks of the pinyin on your document. The slightest change in tones change the whole meaning of the word, so be careful. Overall, I feel that you did a pretty good job on your notetaking project.GDKCV12's comments:
Good use of colors and contrast. Included all information about characters such as radicals, stroke counts, etc. I liked the little "story" behind each character; these are good ways to remember the formation of the characters and are useful in distinguishing similar characters. Interesting questions raised some good points about the origins of the characters. However, there were no tone marks on any of the pinyin. Next time, use the pinyin editor to insert tones.MJBCV12's comments: Overall, your project contained all of the important information, and was summarized very well. I really enjoyed reading the two different stories that explain how the characters were made. I also liked how you put two separate questions for the characters, because they really make you wonder why the characters are "shaped" the way they are, and it seems that they could have made them in a much more logical way. One thing that could have made your project a lot better is if you had put the tones over the pinyin, because without them you can not completely know how to pronounce them properly. Besides the tones, I think you did a great job, and everything was very well organized